A Place in the Sun: 10th Literature/Composition

June 26, 2007

Color Poetry

Filed under: Poetry — theunquietlibrary @ 3:42 pm

Yesterday we experimented with a strategy for writing poems called a “color approach to poetry.”  Please take a moment to share your draft of your color poem here.  Thanks!

Mrs. Hamilton
Click here to read Mrs. Hamilton’s color poem, “Orange.”

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  1. GREEN

    Green is the color of earth
    The color of money
    And even granny smith
    Apples

    There are green jellybeans
    And green stop lights
    Green feels sour or
    Green feels fast

    Green is a tool to power
    That not everyone gets to hold
    It makes the world work
    But also causes problems

    Green should be free to everyone
    And there should definitely be
    More green in the world

    Green feels like
    Grass under your feet
    Green is the color of health and power
    Green should bring comfort but
    Green looks to do more bad
    Than good

    Comment by MaRk F — June 26, 2007 @ 4:51 pm

  2. “Yellow”

    Yellow is the color of Joy
    An unexpected child
    To a loving family

    There are yellow daisies and yellow sunsets
    Parenthood feels yellow, joyful and bright
    Yellow is the walk in the park

    Yellow should be bright and happy
    Always smiling up at you

    Yellow feels like happiness, joy, and excitement
    Yellow is the lilies floating on the water
    Or the wild flowers in the distance

    Yellow should feel like tomorrow
    But seem like yesterday
    With every heart beat and joyful smile

    Comment by Tiffany D. — June 26, 2007 @ 5:10 pm

  3. Tan is the color of happiness
    A person I
    Have loved
    For quite some
    Time

    There are tan animals and people
    Skin feels tan, smooth and soft
    She is the tan that I know,
    That I love,
    But also the tan that I trust

    Tan should be rough and rigid
    Not the way I like it to be
    Like the way it is with you

    Tan feels like happiness
    Tan is the person I love, that I can turn to
    And the person that I trust

    Tan should feel like sand
    But it feels like silk
    A light, smooth cloth
    Wrapping the body of
    The lonely

    Comment by wesley d — June 26, 2007 @ 5:13 pm

  4. Green

    Green is the color of luck
    It brings new beginnings
    Symbolizing money

    There are green clovers
    And green lilies
    Success feels green, big, and bright
    But green is envy and trickery

    Green should be happiness and delight
    Not powerful greed
    It is to be forever sacred and saved

    Green feels like shame and sorrow
    Green is the rich
    Or maybe even the poor

    Green should feel like hope and achievement
    But it looks like grimness
    A pain, sharp, and hard

    Comment by TonyaG — June 26, 2007 @ 5:13 pm

  5. White

    White is the color of purity,
    the mistakes of past
    forgiven, and the slate
    cleaned and given anew.

    There are white walls and white canvas.
    The white canvas feels ready to be filled
    with the black ink of ideas.
    White is a wall that begs
    to be painted with whatever path
    that you wish to choose.

    White should be clean and pure,
    only to be stained and tainted
    with the world around it.

    White feels like the dead of Winter,
    cold and still, only waiting
    for Spring to give it life again.
    White is the color that helps
    to clean a slab, that is marked
    with the pain of mistake.

    White should feel
    like purity and cleanliness,
    but white looks like black
    with the smallest of errors.
    That is not what I see
    on a spotted canvas.
    I see a white canvas ready
    to be cleaned,
    of its spotted mistakes.

    Comment by Robert B. — June 26, 2007 @ 5:14 pm

  6. Blue

    Blue is the color of the ocean
    The color of the sky
    Blue is the color of relaxation

    Blue feels cool
    Like summer time swim
    Blue is so refreshing
    After along run

    Blue covers over 70% of the world
    Blue is fun to look
    Its fun to watch the birds
    Fly through the blue sky

    Blue it feels good to swim in it
    It feels good to drink it
    And it makes you feel good
    Just to gaze into it

    Comment by Sean W — June 26, 2007 @ 5:15 pm

  7. GRAY

    Gray is the color of winter
    A season looked forward too
    That brings joy
    Which brings fun

    There are gray clouds and gray days
    Gray brings snow
    Snow brings winter

    Gray feels like winter and snow
    Or just a rainy day

    Gray should feel like joy
    But instead is mistaken as dull

    Comment by Mike H — June 26, 2007 @ 5:16 pm

  8. GREEN

    Green is the color of luck, which I hope for everyday.
    Freshness in which I look when I wear it, and envy
    In which I shall never come across in my mind.

    There are green mountains and
    Green moist leaves in the summer
    Money feels green, happy and satisfied.
    But green also is the beginning of my
    Happiness as of today.

    Green should be filled with enjoyable moments:
    Never with sad experiences.

    Green feel’s like success waiting
    To happen. Green is money which
    I will get a great amount of through-
    Out my career.

    Green should feel like luck, freshness and greed.
    But instead as of this second it feels like future
    Loneliness and sadness.

    Comment by lauren l. — June 26, 2007 @ 5:17 pm

  9. “Black”

    Black is the color of death
    Black is the color of nothingness
    Black is the color of deception

    There are black nights and days
    Black feels dark and cold
    Black is the color of my past and present

    Black should be feared
    Not loved
    For fear is the best weapon against the enemy

    Black feels like the darkness after
    The sun goes down
    Black is the sign of death

    Black should feel like emptiness
    But black is fear
    Fear
    Fear attracts the fearful
    The strong
    The weak
    The corrupt
    Fear is my ally

    Comment by Zak S. — June 26, 2007 @ 5:26 pm

  10. Green is the color of life
    Where everything has
    A new beginning
    A new born
    And a new death

    There are green plants and green people
    Happiness feels green, serious and bright
    Green is the color I see in someone
    No matter whom they are

    Green should be happy families
    And happy living

    Green feels like
    A new born child
    Coming into deaths arms

    Green should feel like spring
    But it feels, looks, smells, and sounds like
    Death around the corner

    Comment by Adrian R. — June 26, 2007 @ 6:05 pm

  11. Red is the color of
    Hatred which we all have for each other
    Blood for what my country has suffered
    And the pain on my chest for how much pressure I have

    There are red abominate and red violence
    Red feels like a broken glass
    Scattered into a million pieces
    Red is a symbol for war

    Red should be given a chance
    Not a battle or pain
    Red feels like the end of a story
    Red is the time to be in piece

    Red should feel like a happy child
    But it feels, looks, smells, and sounds like war

    Comment by Adrian R. — June 26, 2007 @ 6:12 pm

  12. White is the color of freedom
    Breaks down to help
    To give ones life back

    There are white clouds and white seagulls all around
    White feels like relief from the world
    White is the turning point for freedom

    White should be everywhere
    Everywhere you go white is there
    With you by your side
    In your dreams
    Everywhere white should be

    White feels like new opportunities
    White is the birth of a new world
    Of freedom

    White should feel like nothing but
    White feels great
    Looks new
    Smells like new
    Sounds like freedom
    White is freedom form everyone
    And everything

    Comment by kris p. — June 26, 2007 @ 6:27 pm

  13. Black is the color of death
    Creeping through the shadows
    its the color of unsureness

    There are black nights and black smiles
    Black feels cold and lifeless
    Black is the reaper looking for wandering souls

    Black should be good and pure
    But instead its the color of dead love

    Black feels like loneliness
    Black is the color of night and uncertainty

    Black should feel like any day of the year
    But instead if feels like the last day

    Comment by Ben A. — June 26, 2007 @ 6:32 pm


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